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Listen, the only reason I'm going out of my way to tell any of you this is because the story "Jane the Killer" is starting to piss me off.
My real name is Jane Arkensaw, a.k.a. "Jane the Killer" and this is how I met Jeff, the reason I look the way I do, and why I want to kill him.
When I heard that a new family had moved in across the street, I wasn't that surprised. It was a nice neighborhood, and the house was relatively cheap considering where it was. I guess I was about 13-14 when everything went to hell.

I never really talked to Jeff when he moved in. To be frank I never talked to him untill... that night. But it's too soon to talk about that now. My first impresstion of Jeff was that he was a good kid. Probably got nice grades, rarely got into fights, maybe even a cool guy if he opened up to someone.

His brother Liu, seemed like he put family first by the way he sat with his brother on the sidewalk. Of course I was just guessing at the time and really didn't put much thought into my analisys because I was getting ready for school when I looked out the window and I was running late, which was unsual for me at that time in my life because I was hardly ever late for anything. Especially school.

I wasn't surprised when I saw Randy and his stooges go up to Jeff and Liu on that stupid skateboard of his. Randy was nothing but a bully, he always picked on anyone who was smaller than him.

He was even the reason why my parents drove me to school instead of the letting me take the bus like everyone else. Everyone had their lunch money or some kind of cash given to Randy and his goons because of some "toll" that he demanded from everyone.

We all knew Randy's group had knives and threatened to use them on us we ever told anyone about the money they took from the other kids on the block. Everyone, except the new kids they were trying the intimidate like the rest of us.

When I saw Randy talking to them through the window I just looked away. It was wussy thing to do but. I had better things to do than watch another kid hand over his money to Randy. But curiosity got the better of me and I looked up a few seconds later. What I saw left me speechless. Jeff was standing now, and it looked like Randy already had what he wanted.

"Just sit down," I thought, "Don't be stupid".

Then I saw Jeff punch Randy in the face and break his wrist.

"Oh my god." I whispered. Then I yelled, "You Idiot!"

My parents ran down the stairs and asked what happened. Then they looked outside and saw what was going on. Jeff had already stabbed the fat guy, I think his name was Troy, and he went down screaming. Keith only went down with a single punch. Since my house was across the street from where Jeff and his brother were sitting, with the front of the house having big windows, we saw the whole thing. Or at least I did, my parents came in after the part where Randy stole their wallet, so they didn't know the whole truth.
this is not mine!
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Cleverfox409 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know the real story for both jeff the killer and Jane.
rosabell2005 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
animecraz901 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Artist
oh really please tell pretty please
kittenmycat Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist
dose anyone know the real story of both of them? ive been surching for it for a looooong time and find diffrent ones all the time. if anyone really can tell me what really happens it would be a big help.
animecraz901 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Artist
ok here you go the real Jeff and Jane stories
for Jeff:[link]
for Jane:[link]
hope you enjoy :)
kittenmycat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist
thanks. it helped. i love creepypastas. whats your fave?
animecraz901 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Artist
well... my first creepy pasta was slender man but to be true I don't have a fave
I love them all wats yours?
kittenmycat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist
... jane. yep. i LOVE her. i also LOVE ben. there really good creepypastas. i think i like jane more tho. shes a good person but still kick butt! slenderman is cool but hes not that scarry. no offence. do you like luigis manchon? they made a really good one called go to sleep. sonic ones are also really good. arg! i dooonnnttt kkknnnooowww!
animecraz901 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Artist
it's to hard to choose but luigis manchon was a really good but yeah I think slendy is to much of a sweetheart to be scary don't you think?
kittenmycat Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist
ya. pewdiepie freaks when he played/read it. lol. i dont find it that scarry. do you watch youtube creepypastas. if so whitch one is your fave and whos the person who made it?
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